[ooc] meme i may live to regret

[apostatised]

This is the "how's my driving?" meme.

So, I don't know anyone who doesn't feel like they aren't getting enough feedback. So... let's give some. What do you like about my pup? What do you think could be improved? What things about them do you not understand that you'd like elaborated on?

Comments

[newmythology.livejournal.com]

OKAY

1) I enjoy how Martel has sort of (SORT OF) softened after...dying, uh. After writing him in TROM the difference is clearer to me--obviously he's with a very different and far more psychotic woman in TROM-verse, but either way he's much more difficult there, lmao. Though any iteration of him is kind of bratty. >_>

2) I really like how he's been fleshed out. In the Elenium, he is uh. The villain, you know, so that's his role, and beyond that he's being so influenced by Zalasta he's not at his best. We see him being a jerk to Sparhawk and co., mostly. But you took that and the other implications made about his personality and made him whole instead of just Sparhawk's Sardonic Foil or whatever.

3) Candice is, you know, gonna marry the guy probably, so she's obviously biased but she would like to see him make more frands. And so would I. ALSO THE IDEA OF HIM HANGING OUT WITH ALTHALUS IS HILARIOUS, OKAY. I'm v. curious about that narrative idea you had and the impressions people would get of Martel and Candice--especially if C starts doing some of her work in the area, which she's considered.