you magnificent fuck up
19 February 2010 @ 02:23 am
[narrative] but from what wound it wells so far i have not found  
Just as he told his wife, Martel has no intention of going into battle - if it should become necessary, he's willing, but the Arums have an able commander already. He serves another purpose, and even if chafes at him to be cloistered in the ducal palace playing at diplomat when he could be on a horse with a sword drawn- that's not what he's there for, and he knows it. Nitral, the Duke, is unusually well-liked by Martel's closest Arum compatriot and he's along less because Koleika can't get along with him and more to save time and hassle all around. The iron-jawed chief had put it bluntly: "You like to talk, Martel. I don't. You can do the talking."

It's not terrible, anyway; the city is everything Koleika promised him that it'd be and when they're not translating Arum work ethic into something the rest of the Duke's command can actually understand, Martel takes the opportunity to acquaint himself with this brilliant architect conveniently born into just the position to indulge his passion. He can relate, and they're right, really; he has always liked the sound of his own voice. There's another reason he's here - to get a feel for how they do things, to get these people used to dealing with him - and the fact that they don't need to discuss that is just one of the reasons that Martel so admires his friend.

Wenos can't pay the high prices that the Arum clans demand for their soldiers, and Martel expects to be leaving the city in plenty of time to take care of the little problem he has Ewar keeping an eye on for him. It doesn't work out that way, of course; it never does.

Wenos may not be able to afford to pay for an entire Arum force, but they can find the funds to try cutting off the head of the snake; Martel is pacing his guest chamber in sleeping trousers when he hears the tell-tale choked gurgle outside in the hall, interrupting his reading. The guards are dead, he judges, and Nitral and his duchess lie sleeping across the hall. The decision to pick up the knife he'd been cleaning and sharpening earlier is an easy one to make, and he nudges the door ajar to get an idea of where they are before shoving it suddenly open with a satisfying crack against the back of the first man's skull.

The first one down draws the other two in his direction - it's a short, ugly fight and a kick in the back has Martel slamming face first into the wall unexpectedly. He and the assassin behind him simultaneously misjudge each other; the knife slices his back open instead of stabbing through his ribs when he pushes his hands against the wall and slams himself backwards, knocking the other man off-balance and snagging that knife in one, smooth movement-

-it embeds in the back of the last man's neck, bringing him down to his knees in front of Nitral's door even as Martel crushes the second man's windpipe under his bare foot, leaning hard- hard- harder, when he falls, his knees buckling underneath him as he realizes only belatedly, when the fracas in the hallway summons the Duke with his own sword out, that the sting of the blade hadn't been entirely the fault of the steel.

His vision swims and then, mercifully, he passes out.
 
 
you magnificent fuck up
22 January 2010 @ 12:29 am
[narrative] he knew human folly like the back of his hand  
Winter is a miserable time to go to war - in particular due to winter being a miserable time to tramp down from the mountains - but the frost should have broken at least by the time they're passing Maghu, and between then and now Martel ought to have plenty of time to regret agreeing to this. It's a profitable thing, though, and God knows it's worthwhile to establish his contacts in the flatlands sooner rather than later. He treats it like an idle stroll in the countryside, the way he and Kalten used to look at each other and shrug instead of bothering to consider that the sometimes chillingly casual attitude of Pandions toward their violence wasn't normal or appropriate; where they knew what lay beneath that, he wonders where the differences lie between himself and the nearest and dearest of worlds he still doesn't understand and doesn't care to find out this way. All things in Martel's life come down to perception, sooner or later; Candice knows better, sees through him, and then he feels the most secure in his decisions.

Having learned a long time ago that shrugging off any battle is tantamount to suicide, regardless of skill or experience, he ignores the cheerful fiction that he's along to do nothing more than grease wheels and prevent Koleika from finding himself in the position of threatening another Treborean nobleman - he would've ignored it even if it were true, because a diplomat bleeds just the same as anyone else. Easier, usually, in Martel's long and storied history.

Despite what will be weeks, maybe months, of his absence - he chooses not to mention what he's doing to more than a few people, and none of them outside his home are informed of anything like 'when' or 'where' or 'why'. Sparhawk and Martel are alike in some ways more than others, and their habitual secret-keeping is nothing especially new. He thinks of his brother in a detached sort of a way, and occupies some evenings penning the first [eight] drafts of a letter that he will send. He finally does early one morning before they break camp, twisting enchantment around a pathway into the nexus instead of bothering with a messenger that almost certainly wouldn't be able to find him.
S.

Come to your senses yet?

I've attached directions to the portal I found. It's safe either side, near as I can tell, but for what I assume are painfully obvious reasons I haven't had the occasion to go through and be utterly sure that it's going to the right world. You'll come out on a beach opposite Thalesia's strait, if I'm any judge, so I suggest finding yourself a horse in the interim. Faran will find it somewhere in his black and volatile heart to forgive you the infidelity, I'm sure. Every means I can devise to test it indicates it's the right world. There's only one way left to find out, and my brother, better you than me.

If you haven't come to your senses - marvelous. As much as I could go a hundred years (and well might; evidently the physiology of a resurrected soul isn't entirely unlike that of a troll) without seeing Elenia again, happily, my wife is interested in visiting. Discreetly. Apparently I have myself a sentimentalist; she also thinks this is a good idea. There are many, many things that you and I need to talk about before we do any such damn thing - and they'll have to wait, I'm doing a friend of mine a favour with his little war - but as I can't be sure you remember how our conversation turned out (was it very good wine, old boy?) I felt obliged to properly indicate my willingness to be reasonable.

You'll find instructions on the spell I use to send letters through the nexus with this, too, and I feel confident that you can master something simple enough for even Kalten's understanding of sorcery. If you hurry home, mother might help you with the tricky parts.

Your brother,
M.
There have probably been warmer invitations to reconciliation, and there have almost certainly been kinder ways of helping a brother; he doubts Sparhawk would trust his aid if it came gently, and rightly so. The best way of determining an Elene's sincerity in his concern for you is judging how annoyed he seems to be about the inconvenience.

(He has no intention of riding into a battle with these worries still hanging over his head. Sparhawk has the means of getting back to his child-bride now, and he can do with it what he will.)
 
 
you magnificent fuck up
24 September 2008 @ 01:19 am
[prompt] masquerading as a man with a reason  

Silence is a comfortable enough thing for Martel; he doesn't mind Koleika's tendency towards it, the expected pauses between threads of conversation. They meet when time permits - for casual discussion, for back and forth on Martel's training designs, but most usually for a drink and Martel's continued immersion in his new home. It's nice to know who your neighbors are, and whether or not they're likely to lay siege to you.

These are the things he thinks about, shut up in his castle. Some habits die hard, and he had an analytical mind long before he developed fairly understandable paranoia. A man who's fought wars for gold (not gods; Martel appreciates the Arums' matter of fact pragmatism even as he can't quite wrap his mind around the idea of living that way) all over this world is a good man to know, as far as he's concerned. He might be a recluse now, but who's to say how things will stand in a few years' time? No, he's always preferred to know what he needs to know before he knows he needs it.

Martel's been asking questions again - always asking questions - and it's late one afternoon while they watch the dusk settle on the mountains and ponder in that relaxing quiet a man who married a goddess that Koleika observes, "You have the mind of a politician."

"Bite your tongue, Koleika. I haven't swindled you yet."

prompt: talk about politics [#249]
word count: 240

 
 
you magnificent fuck up
06 July 2008 @ 02:54 am
[narrative] white's the dove that longs to fly  


Maria's a godsend -- in so many ways, but specifically (this week at least), she's the godsend that has allowed him to at last line up his funds and finalize the sale. The Arums are what he personally thinks of as 'decent people'; their approach to life has a straightforwardness matched with underlying complexity that he can appreciate. The details of further dealings have yet to be hammered out, but a quick go around with the chief himself led to the concession that perhaps this peculiar foreign swordsman might have something useful to teach the young clansmen.

In particular, the clan chief is interested in Martel's own personal innovations. (He'd drawn back from completing the parry-pas-nine at the last possible moment, but Koleika got his point almost immediately. A blade in front of a man's face tends to bring things sharply into focus.) 

Conversations later decided more or less for him to make his way to Mawor when he's got the leisure to do so; he doubts he'll have the opportunity to speak with this architecturally inclined Duke personally, but a look at those walls would be...interesting. If nothing else, he might get a few ideas. 

For now, making the necessities liveable is enough of a project. He's not getting ahead of himself.

(Much. Yet.)